Jeremias+P

Mr. Jeremias M. Panariello 6-06 English 5/3/10

iPods I magine using an IPod, only listening to music so you don’t get distracted. That can happen, __that is what my essay is about__. __Some supporting reasons are__ focus, won’t be bad, and have fun. __Pay attention and listen carefully to my essay__.

Let’s start with focus. First, you have to listen__, that’s a huge topic__. Secondly, you won’t stare in space no more. Lastly, you can do your work while you are listening to music. __That is why you should focus.__

Now, lets get into __the topic of__ being bad. There will be no bullying because of people listening to music. The teachers won’t stop because of disruptions. Also teachers will give out fewer detentions. __The topic of being bad is over.__

Last __reason is to__ have fun. When you have fun, you can be cooler. You can head bang while doing your work quietly. You will be entertained all the time.

__That is my essay. My first topic was__ focusing. __My second topic was__ won’t be bad. __And my last topic was__ having fun. __My essay is complete.__